tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post959785578750320612..comments2022-11-08T06:05:03.391-07:00Comments on THE POET TREEHOUSE: A TOUCH OF GOLD S.E.Ingrahamhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-73106006669097342582013-05-21T22:58:52.453-06:002013-05-21T22:58:52.453-06:00This is stunning, love loveThis is stunning, love loveAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-24443599309232561402013-05-21T19:14:33.389-06:002013-05-21T19:14:33.389-06:00Beautiful imagery throughout, Sharon.
PamelaBeautiful imagery throughout, Sharon.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-46161538923557399052013-05-21T05:53:07.508-06:002013-05-21T05:53:07.508-06:00Beautiful light painted against the darkness. Thi...Beautiful light painted against the darkness. This is wonderful description, Sharon.brenda whttp://undercaws.com/2013/05/20/beyond-safe-harbor/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-60442998551590735942013-05-20T16:37:21.550-06:002013-05-20T16:37:21.550-06:00'sunset's
nebulous leavings'
paints a ...'sunset's<br />nebulous leavings'<br />paints a perfect picture...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-36232350705475108102013-05-20T15:27:09.146-06:002013-05-20T15:27:09.146-06:00thanks for this feedback oldegg, as I went back an...thanks for this feedback oldegg, as I went back and forth about this wording; the way I have it now reads clumsily to me and sometimes I prefer that but I think you're right, I will do a rewording...thanks again!S.E.Ingrahamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02135141369161538082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-74609324518281858552013-05-20T14:42:17.845-06:002013-05-20T14:42:17.845-06:00Perfect description: "blazing corals that are...Perfect description: "blazing corals that are sunset's nebulous leavings" - really wonderful piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-87093607581859379952013-05-20T10:33:08.798-06:002013-05-20T10:33:08.798-06:00I often time nebulous fascinations,myself.I often time nebulous fascinations,myself.Cherylhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15937202381298099458noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-49826365278245455742013-05-20T07:28:26.765-06:002013-05-20T07:28:26.765-06:00the touch of gold
the lamp appears to hold
once i...the touch of gold<br />the lamp appears to hold <br />once it flickers alone, <br />the only brightness <br />to cut the dark<br /><br />The strength of one special person can be unusual. Once it extends its help it alone can be a bastion of defence. Nicely SE<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-43763651434360145312013-05-20T07:16:24.252-06:002013-05-20T07:16:24.252-06:00Beautiful poem. I like the picture too.Beautiful poem. I like the picture too.Wanda Psychohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09398274683194725769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-12308617892593206632013-05-20T07:01:08.833-06:002013-05-20T07:01:08.833-06:00That "finally" is an interesting choice....That "finally" is an interesting choice. The hard chop softened with a trailing "ly".Briarcathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04672810006418059452noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-7711414939026269952013-05-20T03:42:05.761-06:002013-05-20T03:42:05.761-06:00Intriguing. Just read a novel in which one of the ...Intriguing. Just read a novel in which one of the characters spends all of her time waiting at the window for a man the rest of the town knows will never come for her. Your poem felt familiar for that reason. Love how well you planted the words into the fading light of the day. Very seeable, with a sort of hushed tone as those imparting a secret. <br /><br />Elizabeth<br />http://Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-73251179680911624572013-05-20T02:40:38.063-06:002013-05-20T02:40:38.063-06:00I particularly like the second verse.I particularly like the second verse.Inahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04744178089188393987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2063633755831518437.post-13670627323072257482013-05-20T00:54:51.215-06:002013-05-20T00:54:51.215-06:00I really liked this piece as I could imagine the s...I really liked this piece as I could imagine the scene as darkness fell. Though being picky I wanted the last four words to read "finally cut the dark."Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.com