Wednesday, December 28, 2011

FAST THE NEW YEAR

Comes the New Year ever faster
And with it lists of resolution
Demolish Old Year gaffes and disaster
Transform me, grant me absolution  

10 comments:

  1. Sharon- It's so good to see you linking up to poetry sites. As always, I love your poetry. This one's short for you, but says so much. Happy New Year!

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  2. Well we can always hope for perfection but our little faults makes us so much more human.

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  3. we always hope for absolution.Great poem
    HappY New Year

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  4. I like the idea of demolishing the gaffes. Unfortunately they live on in memory.

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  5. Thanks Laurie, oldegg, Sheilagh and Rinkly - very nice of all of you to read and to comment! Happy New Year right back to you ... and Rinkly, luckily my memory's failing so that's one good thing when it comes to demolishing gaffes - sometimes they stay gone ... lol

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  6. Sincere, heartfeld rhythmic rhyme. Bravo.

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  7. Sounds like that's the good news: all those resolutions gone more quickly ;-)

    margo

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  8. yes, the new year totally transforms us. bang, Jan 1, and we are all totally different people.

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